<translation_analysis>
The MQM feedback identifies a minor terminology inconsistency issue regarding the translation of Finnish pocket terms "rintataskua" and "povitaskua." Let me analyze this:
1. **Original Finnish text analysis:**
- "2 rintataskua listoilla sekä vetoketjuilla" = "2 chest pockets with storm flaps and zippers"
- "Kaksi povitaskua, toinen vetoketjulla" = "Two breast pockets, one with zipper"
2. **Current translation analysis:**
- "rintataskua" → "chest pockets"
- "povitaskua" → "breast pockets"
3. **Issue assessment:**
The feedback correctly identifies that both "rintataskua" and "povitaskua" refer to pockets in the chest/breast area, but the inconsistent translation suggests they might be different types of pockets. In Finnish, "rintataskua" typically refers to chest pockets (often higher up, near the chest area), while "povitaskua" can refer to breast pockets (often slightly lower or in a different position).
4. **Context consideration:**
Given this is a technical product description for protective workwear, precision in terminology is important. The jacket appears to have multiple pocket types in the chest/breast area, and the original Finnish text likely distinguishes between different pocket locations or styles.
5. **Proposed solution:**
To maintain consistency and clarity, I should use "chest pockets" for both terms since they refer to the same general area, or maintain the distinction if it serves a functional purpose. Given that this is technical workwear documentation, maintaining some distinction might be valuable, but consistency in similar pocket types would be better.
6. **Priority assessment:**
This is correctly identified as a minor issue since both translations are technically correct, but consistency would improve the overall quality of the translation.
</translation_analysis>
<refined_translation>
{
"reason": "Refined the translation to address the minor terminology inconsistency identified in the MQM feedback. Both 'rintataskua' and 'povitaskua' were standardized to 'chest pockets' for consistency, as they both refer to pockets in the chest area of the jacket. This maintains technical accuracy while providing consistent terminology throughout the product description.",
"refinement": "The Flamestat high vis Airtech® shell jacket is a multi-standard compliant protective jacket that combines flame protection, waterproofness and breathability. The Airtech® material provides excellent protection against heat, flames and electric arc, while repelling dirt, oil and water. The jacket is designed for demanding work environments that require high-level protection and visibility.
Product features:
- Airtech® waterproof and windproof yet breathable material
- Inherently flame retardant construction
- Dirt, oil and water repellent surface
- Detachable and adjustable hood
- Front storm flap and two-way zipper up to the top of collar, with hidden hook and loop fastening
- 2 chest pockets with storm flaps and zippers, one with D-ring
- Zippered map pocket inside and inside phone pocket with external access
- Two chest pockets, one with zipper
- Two fleece-lined zippered front pockets
- Adjustable cuffs and inner elastic wristbands in cuffs
- Extended back section
- Adjustable hem with drawcords
- Zipper in lining for transfers and embroidery
Technical specifications:
- Material composition: 50% Modacrylic, 41% cotton, 7% Polyurethane, 2% antistatic fiber, 2-layer lamination
- Lining: 50% aramid, 50% viscose
- Outer fabric: 260 g/m²
- Lining fabric: 130 g/m²
- Water column value: 10,000 mm
- Breathability RET: 14.44
- Taped seams
- Approval after 25 washes
- ÖKO-TEX® certified
Recommended applications:
- Heat and flame protection
- Welding
- Electrostatic environments
- Electric arc protection
- Limited protection against liquid chemicals
- Visibility requirements
- Rain protection
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